REPLACE with the opening paragraph. Lead with the point, not a windup. One clear idea per paragraph.
REPLACE with body copy. Keep sentences plain and specific. Numbers carry commas, as in $525,000.
REPLACE with a pull quote if one earns its place. Otherwise delete this line.
Use a list when it reads more clearly than a paragraph:
REPLACE with the takeaway. Tell the reader what to do with what they just learned.
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